Poems
- Thread starter LadyDeath
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crazy for my baby.
I'm blinded by this feeling,
I can't let you go,
your pain hurts me more,
Am I in a daze?
Or is it just a phase?
Hmm, baby, your love is what I crave.
Without you, life would be a dead end street,
Nothing would ever get me back onto my feet,
Mesmerize me, with words so sweet,
and keep me forever, ill always be your treat.
Like Selena, when all the world is sleeping,
I stay up and think of you.
You made all my dreams come true.
From the start I knew you were mine,
and finally, our hearts are now intertwined.
For brbk4998 i love you =]
[5/12/07]
I'm blinded by this feeling,
I can't let you go,
your pain hurts me more,
Am I in a daze?
Or is it just a phase?
Hmm, baby, your love is what I crave.
Without you, life would be a dead end street,
Nothing would ever get me back onto my feet,
Mesmerize me, with words so sweet,
and keep me forever, ill always be your treat.
Like Selena, when all the world is sleeping,
I stay up and think of you.
You made all my dreams come true.
From the start I knew you were mine,
and finally, our hearts are now intertwined.
For brbk4998 i love you =]
[5/12/07]
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hey ppl.......nice work.......dis one i wrote about my frens......
MY BLANKET
I pull my blanket,
over my head.
In this cold night,
lying in my bed.
So warm it is,
this blanket of mine.
Love and friendship,
sorrows, left behind.
The Jester’s laugh,
the maiden fair.
The warrior born,
all seemed to hear.
Earth born angels,
surrounding me.
Brothers of old,
blind, I see.
My little fairy,
has flown away.
Still I love her,
yet, I cannot stay.
Under my blanket,
here I weep.
In their arms,
here I sleep.
Under my blanket,
here I sleep.
Knowing my soul,
is in their keep.
Under my blanket,
here I sleep…..
MY BLANKET
I pull my blanket,
over my head.
In this cold night,
lying in my bed.
So warm it is,
this blanket of mine.
Love and friendship,
sorrows, left behind.
The Jester’s laugh,
the maiden fair.
The warrior born,
all seemed to hear.
Earth born angels,
surrounding me.
Brothers of old,
blind, I see.
My little fairy,
has flown away.
Still I love her,
yet, I cannot stay.
Under my blanket,
here I weep.
In their arms,
here I sleep.
Under my blanket,
here I sleep.
Knowing my soul,
is in their keep.
Under my blanket,
here I sleep…..
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wrote for my bro........he was goin tru a tough time.....
Battle Worn
Warrior, thou art battle worn,
yet the battle rages on.
Rest thy blade, O brother, my friend,
to our friendship there is no end.
Listen, hear the songs angels sing,
among mortals, we shall become kings.
A secret we share with no other,
when you just whisper the word brother.
And so into battle you thus ride,
know my friend, your brothers are at your side…
Battle Worn
Warrior, thou art battle worn,
yet the battle rages on.
Rest thy blade, O brother, my friend,
to our friendship there is no end.
Listen, hear the songs angels sing,
among mortals, we shall become kings.
A secret we share with no other,
when you just whisper the word brother.
And so into battle you thus ride,
know my friend, your brothers are at your side…
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Things Change
things change
some get out of range
they can get out of hand
then you have to find where you stand
sometimes you wont fit
but thats all the time you'll get
you just have to find where you stick
then just accept it
some dont like it & want everything to remain
but no one realizes that nothing stays the same
things change
some get out of range
they can get out of hand
then you have to find where you stand
sometimes you wont fit
but thats all the time you'll get
you just have to find where you stick
then just accept it
some dont like it & want everything to remain
but no one realizes that nothing stays the same
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I am here on the forum
But it looks as if it haunted by ghosts
So i came to the poem section to see who post
It was cjunkie and her wisdom lines
With her abc abc end note rhyme
Yes Easter is here
Do not fear
I am going Toco tomorrow.. God Spare
I will be careful
I will miss u all
I hope when i get back to see this forum crowded like a mall
Its jus took me three minutes to write this junk
Better than being all partying and spunk
Cuz now if you go out there to lime
Be expecting company
From people who do not care about you or your money
They just holding you up, raping you and robbing you hunny!
But it looks as if it haunted by ghosts
So i came to the poem section to see who post
It was cjunkie and her wisdom lines
With her abc abc end note rhyme
Yes Easter is here
Do not fear
I am going Toco tomorrow.. God Spare
I will be careful
I will miss u all
I hope when i get back to see this forum crowded like a mall
Its jus took me three minutes to write this junk
Better than being all partying and spunk
Cuz now if you go out there to lime
Be expecting company
From people who do not care about you or your money
They just holding you up, raping you and robbing you hunny!
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i came on yesterday
but i had nuthin 2 say
i looked around 2 c wat otha ppl leave
i wonder if ne1z name iz steve
i look & c ariyah doin freestyle
so i sit here tryin 2 write a mile
i got really bored
i thought of da car i mite be able 2 afford
turnz out it is a ford
i got bored of dat & decided 2 play a video game
but i kno i waz gonna get bored cuz theyre all same
i wanted a change
but i kno dat change iz outta my range
so then i waz bored again & went 2 da park
b4 it got dark
i got home & went 2 my room & wrote
afta a while i felt lik i had sand n my mouth & got a drink 4 my throat
i left da kitchen
when i waz done my drinkin
i went bac 2 my room
checked my e-mail & my myrune
i decided 2 put thiz on da web
b4 i got ready 4 bed
i didnt spend a lot of time
but i hope u ejoy my rhyme
but i had nuthin 2 say
i looked around 2 c wat otha ppl leave
i wonder if ne1z name iz steve
i look & c ariyah doin freestyle
so i sit here tryin 2 write a mile
i got really bored
i thought of da car i mite be able 2 afford
turnz out it is a ford
i got bored of dat & decided 2 play a video game
but i kno i waz gonna get bored cuz theyre all same
i wanted a change
but i kno dat change iz outta my range
so then i waz bored again & went 2 da park
b4 it got dark
i got home & went 2 my room & wrote
afta a while i felt lik i had sand n my mouth & got a drink 4 my throat
i left da kitchen
when i waz done my drinkin
i went bac 2 my room
checked my e-mail & my myrune
i decided 2 put thiz on da web
b4 i got ready 4 bed
i didnt spend a lot of time
but i hope u ejoy my rhyme
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d master aint post a challenge here in a while? but im sure when he's ready to battle it would be quite a predicament 4 him bcuz hes d "master" as [self]proclaimed, but in d mean time we'll b excercisin our quick wits, vocabulary an many other literary skills!!!! lol
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Ya'll better shut up
before i tell ya wat up
cuz you got no clue
of what i can do to you
you aint no expertz
just egg heads- with growth spurtz
yellin till your throat hurts
talkin in blurtz like lil squirts,
sounding stupid- cuz your words r slurred
reciting what you first heard- what just occured.
-when you just got dissed
now aint you pissed
so obious i could not miss
you came, called names, but your not ready for this.
You can beat me i'm a lyricist.
you fighting with gloves
i knock out with my fist.
come hard like a rock then i fade like da mist.
cant test this ninja, i'm on fire and my heat can singe ya .
your jaws flappin like doors- on a creaky hinge ha.
oh no... i got to go....
gotta leave some space to da rest o yo..
just keep yuh mouth shut else you'll spoil da show.
before i tell ya wat up
cuz you got no clue
of what i can do to you
you aint no expertz
just egg heads- with growth spurtz
yellin till your throat hurts
talkin in blurtz like lil squirts,
sounding stupid- cuz your words r slurred
reciting what you first heard- what just occured.
-when you just got dissed
now aint you pissed
so obious i could not miss
you came, called names, but your not ready for this.
You can beat me i'm a lyricist.
you fighting with gloves
i knock out with my fist.
come hard like a rock then i fade like da mist.
cant test this ninja, i'm on fire and my heat can singe ya .
your jaws flappin like doors- on a creaky hinge ha.
oh no... i got to go....
gotta leave some space to da rest o yo..
just keep yuh mouth shut else you'll spoil da show.
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lol^^...I am not worthy.............
I AM LOST
A warrior's fate,
is to be alone.
Living on hate,
a heart made of stone.
I see it in the land,
and smell it in the air.
Insanity made by my own hand,
to such an end, I gravely fear.
All I've ever known,
is battle and war.
Emotionless son, I've grown.
destiny my life's whore.
My brother fights next to me,
I see the gleam in his eyes.
He seems to be so free,
one by one his fears die.
And I try to understand,
the purpose of this fight.
Endless, hourglass without sand,
no sanctuary within my sight.
And I see a familiar path,
one i know all to well.
It leads to a place with no heart,
where the soulless dwell.
Now a fool who lost his way,
blind, with no stars to guide me.
The sky filled with clouded gray,
to the gods I plee!
Why do I live?
Why do I cry?
What do I give?
Tell me why?
I am lost!
I AM LOST
A warrior's fate,
is to be alone.
Living on hate,
a heart made of stone.
I see it in the land,
and smell it in the air.
Insanity made by my own hand,
to such an end, I gravely fear.
All I've ever known,
is battle and war.
Emotionless son, I've grown.
destiny my life's whore.
My brother fights next to me,
I see the gleam in his eyes.
He seems to be so free,
one by one his fears die.
And I try to understand,
the purpose of this fight.
Endless, hourglass without sand,
no sanctuary within my sight.
And I see a familiar path,
one i know all to well.
It leads to a place with no heart,
where the soulless dwell.
Now a fool who lost his way,
blind, with no stars to guide me.
The sky filled with clouded gray,
to the gods I plee!
Why do I live?
Why do I cry?
What do I give?
Tell me why?
I am lost!
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I dont have much warriorness.. so i'll stick to my forced rhyme and overconvoluted wordage. Just a bit more abstract
Closer.
Approaching limits
Getting in it
Growing stronger
wait no longer
closer..
Try not to feed the entropy
Resist the dying tendency
Need the end
Learn to mend..
closer
Nine inches worth of rust
Thrust through six feet of dust.
Trust in this the second man
Upright is what you choose to stand.
closer than before.
Take this it is bliss
No betrayal no kiss
Liberated from the ground
Made fit to take this crown.
Closer. Closer evermore.
Most major step that one could make.
Within arms length and yours to take.
Receive the one and lose the zero.
Caught in the glory of this the hero.
closer. Closer.
Oneness with the flow.
Closeness to the glow.
Heeding to the need..
Suppress the urge to breathe..
So much more than to watch..
Feel compulsion complete the touch.
Closer.
Closer.
Contact.
Closure.
Closer.
Approaching limits
Getting in it
Growing stronger
wait no longer
closer..
Try not to feed the entropy
Resist the dying tendency
Need the end
Learn to mend..
closer
Nine inches worth of rust
Thrust through six feet of dust.
Trust in this the second man
Upright is what you choose to stand.
closer than before.
Take this it is bliss
No betrayal no kiss
Liberated from the ground
Made fit to take this crown.
Closer. Closer evermore.
Most major step that one could make.
Within arms length and yours to take.
Receive the one and lose the zero.
Caught in the glory of this the hero.
closer. Closer.
Oneness with the flow.
Closeness to the glow.
Heeding to the need..
Suppress the urge to breathe..
So much more than to watch..
Feel compulsion complete the touch.
Closer.
Closer.
Contact.
Closure.
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This Guy.
Way to ruin the perfect vein of melancholia
and stab the heart that needs to feel
Using napalm to stoke the fire
And poison a man with zeal
Way to crush his only hope
and murder his chance of solitude
Way to trash his way to cope
Dispite his ingratitude
He wont thank you
He never will
Not even appreciate your tryings
So you just chill.
He will never change
Ignoring your best advances
He will always stay strange
Averse to romances
Dead he feels as much as he reveals
Nothing can breach the scarred seals
Nothing seeps in and nothing leaks out
His pain, contained, his religion- he is devout.
Leave here the damaged one
No sense in spreading the stain
Trust this the worst is done
Dont waste your strength in vain.
Just leave the zombie to shrivel up and die
It wont feel... it cant care.
But if you're sure to save this guy..
I'll still be here..
RauCous
Way to ruin the perfect vein of melancholia
and stab the heart that needs to feel
Using napalm to stoke the fire
And poison a man with zeal
Way to crush his only hope
and murder his chance of solitude
Way to trash his way to cope
Dispite his ingratitude
He wont thank you
He never will
Not even appreciate your tryings
So you just chill.
He will never change
Ignoring your best advances
He will always stay strange
Averse to romances
Dead he feels as much as he reveals
Nothing can breach the scarred seals
Nothing seeps in and nothing leaks out
His pain, contained, his religion- he is devout.
Leave here the damaged one
No sense in spreading the stain
Trust this the worst is done
Dont waste your strength in vain.
Just leave the zombie to shrivel up and die
It wont feel... it cant care.
But if you're sure to save this guy..
I'll still be here..
RauCous