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[i'm not good at writing poems, this is my first actual try] its really a haiku


Snow in your heart,
Flowers in your mind,
All used up like yesterday's top story headline..


im not really referrin 2 anything in my life, but its about someone feelings neglected by their boyfriend/girlfriend, he/she is being coldhearted, cheating, because they have something new on their mind [flowers=spring a new beginning] and this person feels like yesterday's news [cuz it alwayz most important on dat day]

dis haiku sucks.. lol plzz dont b harsh :)
 
odinson said:
actually I wrote dat for my fren on his birthday.....engraved it on a beer mug and gave him it...........but I guess it could be seen as an introduction......lol.......I never wrote anyting really about myself but I"ve written for ppl.......kinda funny......an example was Dark Princess.....its about my fren and how i see her.........
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heyyyyyyyyyy u need 2 teach me how 2 make words ryhme lolll,,, nice work tho :)
 
^^^thanx candy........words dont need to rhyme......once dey come from your heart.....its good enough.....The words I write are basically feelings........
 
candy8998 said:
[i'm not good at writing poems, this is my first actual try] its really a haiku


Snow in your heart,
Flowers in your mind,
All used up like yesterday's top story headline..


im not really referrin 2 anything in my life, but its about someone feelings neglected by their boyfriend/girlfriend, he/she is being coldhearted, cheating, because they have something new on their mind [flowers=spring a new beginning] and this person feels like yesterday's news [cuz it alwayz most important on dat day]

dis haiku sucks.. lol plzz dont b harsh :)
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huh your haiku doesnt suck ITS AWESOME i like haiku but i no good at it lol. :eek:mg:
 
awwwww im not good at haikus or poems im jus good at persuasive an speculative writing lol..btw does ur smiley face move?? cuz i looked down den baq up n 2 me it looked lik it jumped or sumtin!! freakyy :wacko:
 
lol no i had one that blinked but i lost it when i got this one.. i should find it back one day. :)

The Unending.
It's over now,
Forget the lost intricacies,
I'm still calm somehow,
Now that I dont have you to please.
but something is missing,
Like that chapter of my diary.
The words weren't all that interesting.
It hurts to throw away that part of me.
Its over..
That girl I dont know her.
Though i wish i still do.
Though i wish she knew..
Now moving on..
Regret the tortured memories.
The will to try is gone.
And all we're left are our frailties.
Must admit she'd be uncontainable,
I have failed to capture her essence.
Even still she's the unattainble,
And all hope fails into obsolesence.
It's over now,
There's nothing left to cry for,
Nothing left to try anymore.
It's just not worth the hurt
to keep this unending
its not worth the strain
to carry on this stain.
 
ok...so im not actually dat good at makin poemz or nething...im more n2 writin short stories, novelz, & series...but im gonna giv it a try...& itz short but dat only cuz itz my 1st 1...

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I'm Done

I gotta say that now I'm done
Because i realized that I'm the one
Whos always cleaning your mess
Like you're some rodent or pest
Which, come to think it, is true
I'm not gonna lie to you
What I'm sayin is real
I know you dont wanna hear it, but you gotta deal
Because I'm done
Now get outta my face before i make you run
 
RauCous said:
lol no i had one that blinked but i lost it when i got this one.. i should find it back one day. :)

The Unending.
It's over now,
Forget the lost intricacies,
I'm still calm somehow,
Now that I dont have you to please.
but something is missing,
Like that chapter of my diary.
The words weren't all that interesting.
It hurts to throw away that part of me.
Its over..
That girl I dont know her.
Though i wish i still do.
Though i wish she knew..
Now moving on..
Regret the tortured memories.
The will to try is gone.
And all we're left are our frailties.
Must admit she'd be uncontainable,
I have failed to capture her essence.
Even still she's the unattainble,
And all hope fails into obsolesence.
It's over now,
There's nothing left to cry for,
Nothing left to try anymore.
It's just not worth the hurt
to keep this unending
its not worth the strain
to carry on this stain.
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nice!!! lol its blinkin!!!
 
wow....great stuff ppl..........ok so I tried one about myself......

Lightning Falls

Death knows no wrong, no right.
He judges not the weak, the might.
What is the strength of steel?
Compared to the hand that wields!
Searching within my being, my soul.
Deeds in song, as legends unfold.
I will fight, I have bled.
Feeding greedily, on the dead.
Dark skies come with clouded gray.
Lightning falls, the storm’s decay.
In the midst of all, there is one.
Hammer in hand, red beard, the ODINSON...
 
Mystery lies ahead.

I feel you,
slowly creeping in,
out of harm's gaze,
i sit here unaware,
trekking your way towards me,
growing stronger with each step forward,
touch me,
caress me,
with your chilling cold fingers,
whisper in my ear,
tell me things you would never dare,
i wish this moment would last a lifetime,
but it dissipates in two seconds,
and i still sit and anticipate,
my next acquaintance,
with the cool mysterious springtime breeze.
 
WOW
 
TO: RYAN
FROM: ARIYAH
TO MY BABY I LOVE U WITH ALL MY HEART I AM SORRY


i am sorry
that i made u mad at me
i am sorry
that i am like a blind fool trying to see
i am sorry
for huting you tonight
i am sorry
for what i thought was wrong was right
i am sorry
for not spending enough time with you
even when i wanted to
i am sorry
that everyword comes out my mouth seems to you like all lies
that everytime i try to be honest i am being more despised
i am sorry
that i am like the boy who cried "wolf" when it really came
because when i am really telling the truth is like i am the one to blame
i am sorry
that u cannot see
deep inside it's hurts me
to know all the things i've put u through
i wish i hadn't lied to you
for it could of been so great in the beginning with just the truth
now its like i am dying for ur trust
to be able to say something and not be held in thought
cuz i love u with all my heart
and u know that nothing will ever tear us apart
 
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that's so sweet, i know exactly how u feel just wit me it's the other way around!!! don't worry everything would be fine!!! :)
 
....lol....aye candy....wow ....you're good..........I'm impressed..........and inspired......
 
I have no idea why i wrote this poem.......I have the analysis for it thou who wanna hear it jus ask


I see ur face
i have no fear
At you stabbing words
Through my heart like a spear
Towards me, you slowly creep
Like a little toddler, controlling my sleep
U held my body..towards the sink
Drowning me in the water until i couldn't blink
Puzzled i was as you threw me into daze
I was on the floor with my brain confused as if i was in a haze
What a sharp knife u held in your hand?
Slowly Slitting the guilt at your once demand
The liquid ran like a spring flowing out like a hour glass's sand
Is that how i felt?
To know that i was by the heavens gate where i knealt
Or was i dreaming?
Because the light was gone and back to reality i was screaming
To know all this pain and torture i have endure
Our love is no more
I Guess the things i saw was just a illusion to my pain
Clouding my mind until there was finally rain
 

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