Poems

[topcat]

She sits in a corner all alone and cry,
Praying, begging and asking God why.
Why did he have to come into her life,
Oh how it pains, it cuts like a knife.

What made him come and take everyting away,
Why was she so afraid to speck up and say.
What could she have done to make him leave,
Was it her face, or was it her weave.

She did the best that she could have done
She cooked and cleaned and did things just for fun.
But finally it has come to and end,
All she needs now is a friend.

Someone to sit and talk with,
Someone who could handle her when she through her fits.
Someone to laugh with and have fun,
A true friend that does not carry a gun.

Someone who is genuine and real;
Someone who cares about her a great deal.

 

[brbk4498]

I love you...
Please be with me
Ive never felt this way
about any1 b4

I want to learn
new things with u
Want to love u
4ever an always

I want to feel u
frm the inside out
Want to please u
in ne way I can

I want to teach u
what I can do
Want u to teach me
everything u know in bed

I want to cuddle
and take care of u
Want us to be
friends and wild lovers

I want to be with u
and commit my life to urs
Want us to be happy
and together have a family

I love u aruna
Please be with me
I’ve never felt this way
about ne1 ​

 

[RauCous]

Whoa topcat... that pretty dark... :icon_neutral: why dont you try something a little more cheery :icon_cheesygrin: :icon_mrgreen:
brbk coool.... :icon_cool:

 

[EmpireKing]

brbk.....HOW DID THAT LOVE NOTE WORK OUT FOR U???

 

[EmpireKing]

This Heartbeat Thing

Now lets all go over this heartbeat thing once more
When you touch me my heart drops to the floor
It doesnt skip a beat
It skips a rhyme
It skips a couple seconds in time
It skips a moment so sublime
It slows down
It attacks my ever so present frown
Making we wonder
What exactly is so different about you
Dear God please give me a clue
Why do I love...You
Why does your name
Affect this thing called a heart so much
Why is it that only your touch
Can bring about this feeling
Why is it that your simple yet beautiful smile
Can make my epicly boring life worthwhile
Why does your touch affect me in so many ways
When we...are just.....friends
Please give me one comfort
Save me some days
Let me be the one
To affect you in so many wonderful ways
Let me make your heart drop so low
You stop breathing
Let me have you lost for words
Let me fill that empty space that he never could have.



Comments????

 

[RauCous]

Can i steal this? This poem is like a hot girlfriend I WANT IT! lol.
Thanks for sharing this EK, I see some things i feel in there but i've been unable to write anything that not confuscated. So im stealing yours lol.
So does the subject of this poem know about it? Alot of people feel this way but few are able to put it so eloquently. Its worthy of sharing dude.

 

[EmpireKing]

lol yeah u can show ppl but doh forget who write it

 

[RauCous]

Jesus or a girl.

I cut,
Yet you bleed.
Its my rut,
But its your healing that I need.
I hold my breath,
But its you who turns blue.
And I'm not quite done yet.
But you're so willing to see this through.
I screw up- everyday.
But you dont stop- no matter what I say.
Why can't I just suffer all on my own.
Why won't you let me bear this cross alone.
Whats the gain
If you keep stealing the pain.

You try
And I fail to gain.
I cry.
With you stuffering is all in vain.
I think I try to hard just a tad,
To force this breakthrough.
And its so soffocatingly sad
That I cant break you.
I cant cope- now all the time-
But you still see hope- and make me climb.
Though I Try to- make you leave.
You persist through- yes you belive.
In me somehow,
That the the time to heal is now.

 

[LadyDeath]

woi that poem cud be made into a song it real jed RauCous what do you be thinking when u write these things

 

[EmpireKing]

Aiite so this is my entry for the Clico poetry competition thingy....Wrote it yesterday like 5mins before I had to submitt it. Hope u enjoy...


Superhero Wonder

If I had a super power
I'd be able to shoot pens through my eyes
And with my disguise I'd be unknown
My face unshown to the world
A lyrical genius I'd choose to be
Fighting my battles and inspiring
People in herds like cattle
With my comical yet spiritual and magical words
Blue spandex drawers and a silver mask
In my excellence this world would bask.
If I had a super power
Pages would never be blank
They'd be flourishing with words
Of happiness and emotions
I'd wear a big bright cape
And I'd probably have a scar on my face
To represent all the struggles I've faced
To bring me to this place.
If I had super powers
I probably wouldn't literally
Shoot pens out my eyes or
Be able to fly but
I'd inspire millions
Maybe even billions
To try to prosper.
Actually...I don't need super powers for that
I can just be
Me

 

[admin]

Lol copyright you work guys, really great work on the poems wow

 

[LadyDeath]

Yeah i know eh its like really great work of art hmmm we hav real talented people in here :icon_redface:

 

[EmpireKing]

Lol copyright you work guys, really great work on the poems wow

is it possilbe to make this thread viewable to only members with a certain amt of posts just to maybe prevent such things from happening?

 

[admin]

Well its not possible with this thread, a section i can do so

 

[EmpireKing]

oo...aiight den

 

[RauCous]

Whoa dude EK you worried. lol. They might steal your stuff but they cant steal your skills.
What I think when I write? :- usually i have a favorite song in my head that i use as a template. Just to get a word beat or a rhyme scheme or general mood. Another thing I think is DUDE FINISH THIS SO YOU CAN GET TO SLEEP! lol. For some reason i think clearly half asleep. Maybe i mean what i say more that way.

 

[EmpireKing]

^^^.....Actually i dont mind if ppl take my stuff....cuz as I write ppl hear so I'll have proof to state that the poem is MINE. I was jus suggesting that Admin try sumthing in order to protect our work from wandering Jacka$$es who hav nothing better to do than steal.

 

[admin]

Ok i will find a way to do this ok

 

[RauCous]

The UnDeserving.
It's unnatural... his compulsion,
To reach,
To feel.
What doesnt belong
It cannot belong
It's wrong
This wanting
To have
What isn't his
What shouldn't be.
What never was.
She's the unattainable
Barely close enough to take a wiff
But receding like a wave
Beyond his dimming gaze
Far behind the haze
Past where he shouldn't look.
Or even dare to think about.
Or even try to dream in sleep
or awake.
Caught between resistance
and yearning.
Not enough to cause him change
Still too much it causes pain.
Its all in vain this feeling
This gift of emotion
Is wasted on him.
The undeserving.
Its unnatural
to not want love.
He prefers the void
And shuns the shining
Choosing the silent suffering
mistaken for peace
not knowing solitude is overrated.
Not knowing that he cant win
If he wont let her in.
And strangely he wonders why there's nothing there
When he peeks inside.
Only one thing can be gained by his strained meditation.
It's so obvious
Only one conclusion,
concerning her, he is.
Undeserving.

Yeah I know it doesnt rhyme... who cares. I already know it sucks. I still mean it though.

 

[EmpireKing]

Concept Of The Square

I carved this square into my hand
To challenge the normal
Shit talk about love being a circle
See unlike the normal circle
Love has corners
Obstacles
Things holding you back
From the normal Bullshit talk
That is concering "love"...
To me
Love is a square
Complete with obstacles
For all who dare
To take it head on and
Challenge this one line maze.....


WE

I want you and me
To be
Happy
Not angry
Or Melancholy
I want you and me
To be
Happy
As we
Run around that oh so cliche tree
Fall to our knee..s
And carve our names in with glee
I want you and I
To see real love
Love that
Takes you so high
Not even a dove
Can fly
I want you and I
To be so down to earth
So I can show you
What you're really worth
I want you to see what I see
I want you to know what I know
I want you to know that this love...
Wont go
Away not even if I wanted it to.
I want you
To press my head
Against your chest
So that I can hear your heartbeat
While still avoiding touching your breast
Because well I don't wanna violate you in anyway
Yeah
I know we kiss and touch but
I dont want our love to stray
TowaRDs the evils of lust.
Maybe one day we'll have sex but
For now lets just
Stare deeply into each others' eyes
And be consumed by love all over again.
And hopefully that will be when
I'll get the chance to slip onto your finger
This wedding ring .
I want you and me
To become "WE"
I want "WE" to stare
At that same ever so cliche tree
Ten years after we marry
Then turn to each other an say
Thank you for making me "WE".


Will You?

Here I am
Down on two knees
Because I just don't know
Which one,
I guess it doesn't matter
Because there is no other way
To say what I am about to.
Please accept my tears
As a proposal and promise
To love you til the day I die,
Accept this ring
To represent our everlasting love
Take my hand in yours
And let us be one
Together
Will you marry me?


All written by moi